Help

So, I have been working on this story, and I  think it's written really well so far. I really like the way it's all formed, but the problem is I have no idea where it's going... no idea what morals it should have... and I really have no idea how it should end. It's not a novel, just a short story. Here are the two pages I have now. Please read and comment with your thoughts, ideas, criticism, where you think it could go, or any other advice you can think to give.

Many thanks,
Kya Aliana
To read the story and comment, please visit my official website/blog at: KyaAliana.Weebly.Com
 or CLICK HERE to be taken directly

Writing For The Soul

Hi Everyone!
I just wanted to say that I published a new short story on my website that I've been very busy with this week.
This one is a little different, because it's more like writing for the soul. This is a story dealing with a lot of what I am going through right now... what I spend my free time thinking about, and in turn, writing about.
I don't want to give away too many spoilers, though. So head on over to my site and read it! Found on the "Free Stories" tab or just CLICK HERE

Thanks for your interest,
Kya Aliana
 For more information on me, my writing, and to read free short stories, please visit my official website: KyaAliana.Weebly.Com