So, I have been working on this story, and I think it's written
really well so far. I really like the way it's all formed, but the
problem is I have no idea where it's going... no idea what morals it
should have... and I really have no idea how it should end. It's not a
novel, just a short story. Here are the two pages I have now. Please
read and comment with your thoughts, ideas, criticism, where you think
it could go, or any other advice you can think to give.
Many thanks,
Kya Aliana
To read the story and comment, please visit my official website/blog at: KyaAliana.Weebly.Com
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